Arriving at the beach, she reflected on her life
or her lack thereof. She was sitting on the shore, where the water ebbed and flowed right through her translucent feet.
“I wish I had someone to show me how to be a proper ghost.” She sighed loudly.
“I can help you!” Annabelle heard a jolly, nasal voice come from behind her.
She drifted up and turned to face her back. But there was nobody there.
“Hee hee hee hee!!” The voice erupted with manic cackling.
Then a spot in the sand began to crumble, revealing a small, round hole. Annabelle peered into it, and something within peered back with glossy eyes.
It was a crab! It crawled out into the open and swung its claws outward, as if welcoming Annabelle with a hug. “I’m Caleb!”
“A talking crab?” Annabelle knitted her brows in confusion.
Then a wisp drifted out of the crab, which then scuttled away.
The vapor materialised into a tall and lanky teenage boy. He was all cheeky smiles as he floated into a comfortable ‘Jack-paint-me-like-one-of-your-French-girls’ position from the Titanic, hovering in midair.
“No, silly, I’m a ghost, just like you. And I can show you how to be a proper ghost!”
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Excellent story Frederick! I love the being taking over the crab! 🙂 Thanks for writing again for the Mondays Finish the Story challenge! See you next time! Be well… ^..^
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Thanks! I particularly enjoyed this week’s prompt too, so that’s a double thank you to you!
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I liked the subtle humour in your story. A talking ghost crab made me smile.
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I’m glad you liked it! I’m flattered that I could make you smile.
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Too cute! Thanks for the smile 🙂
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I’m flattered that I could have that effect on you 🙂
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Cute story Fred! One ghost befriending another ghost! It made me smile.
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Haha I’m sure Caleb will train Annabelle to become a kick ass ghost!
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Yes, he will! But he isn’t a crab anymore. LOL
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I guess the talking crab gains more reader’s likes than a jovial ghost! Maybe I should revert him back to a crab. Or a monkey. Hmmm… that’s a good idea right there.
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Good idea. 😀
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Ooh, nice take on the prompt. Love the humour – well done!
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Thank you! You’re so kind!
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So nicely done Frederick, takes one ghost to know another…
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Yes, I do know a ghost or two who inspires me to write about their troubles when they first started out 😉
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That was so great an unexpected. Well written too. I loved it!
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Thank you, Lisa!! I’m glad you loved it!
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Oh these amateur ghosts – hahaha, so funny. Good work.
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I can imagine it must be very disorientating to be a ghost. Thanks! 🙂
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Terrific tale Fred ~ Ghostly barbecues with roasted crab ghost on the menu, followed by spiritual surfing ~ 🙂
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Yes, it’s a hauntingly good beach party!
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Love playful ghosts.Great twist to put him in the crab. Great story–entertaining and humorous. Thank youThank you
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Thank you for being so kind!
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“Then a wisp drifted out of the crab, which then scuttled away” These words create a great picture!
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The crab was crawling for its life!
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That was fun.
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Hehe I bet it was!
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I think they’re going to have fun with their lessons in ghosting! Caleb looks and sounds like a rather mischievous character. An interesting take on the prompt. 🙂
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I do hope their lessons would be a ton of fun! I look forward to those!!
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Nice to have someone show you the rope when you’re a novice ghost! I like Caleb! Well done!!!
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Annabelle doesn’t know how lucky she is! Thank you!
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Oh nice story! This made me smile. A cackling maniacal ghost mentor. They’re the best! 🙂
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