If gazebos feel shame,
This gazebo would hang its head,
His flesh and friends were of the same;
From wood they are all made.
If gazebos could move,
This gazebo would not stand so proud,
He’d rather hide than be aloof,
Far away from the crowd.
If gazebos have hearts,
This gazebo would apologize publicly
Announcing he’d rather be torn apart
Than to live a life of hypocrisy.
If gazebos can dream,
This gazebo has other plans.
He will assemble a big team,
and start gathering his fans.
If gazebos could rebel,
This gazebo will start a riot
His pain, no one can quell,
No one can make him quiet.
But gazebos stand still,
So we don’t need to worry,
They neither speak nor feel,
So we believe they’re happy.
Word count: 130
Five stars. You totally made me feel for gazebos… Great stuff!
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Thank you!
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Me too! I never thought of gazebos as having feelings and you made this one almost human. Wonderful poem Fred! 🙂
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Me too? Me too what? Haha thanks PJ, it’s your prompt that inspired this poem so I want to extend my appreciation to you as well 🙂
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I reread it to try and figure out why I would say that and I must have meant, I too think they are all happy. 🙂
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I had just woke up so I could have still been in a “dream” state. LOL!!
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Hahahahaha that would explain!!
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I cannot write poems for good… haha. This is simple, plain yet effective. For the first time (in forever), I am seeing gazebos this way. Great job!
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Haha!! Thank you, Kim Wan! In the first time (in forever), maybe for once, gazebos will have a say.
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This resembles the assumption that because someone is smiling, it means they are happy.
Great poem.
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Spot on, Francesca! Thanks! Glad you liked it!
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Well done Frederick, though one wonders as time goes on and their facade cracks and fades if they are always as happy as they once were…..
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Thank you, sir. Only time would tell
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Please call me Michael, Sir makes me feel so old!!!
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Alright, I’ll keep that in mind, Michael!
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Really interesting take. Nice incorporation of personification! ✪
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Thanks, Angie! Hope you’ve enjoyed it!
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Next time I encounter a gazebo, I will make sure I say “Hello, how are you today?” You made gazebos come alive in your poem.
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The gazebo would like that very very very much! Hope you liked it! 🙂
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You are good at making me think n feel for gazebo, and it’s even funnier to say it out loud.. Well done, good poem👍
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Thank you!
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Great gazebo poem. I’m having a greater respect for them and remembering the one I use to have before moving to another part of town.
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Oh dear! I’m certain that gazebo has been dealing with abandonment issues! Thanks, Jessie 🙂
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Nice poem!
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Thanks!
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Interesting take on the prompt. I’ll never just assume a gazebo is happy again. 🙂
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You enjoyed it? Yep, to assume wrongly would be a heinous crime, don’t you think?
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I did. 🙂
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awesome poem. I feel so bad for the gazebo, we should all go out and hug our gazebos today
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Thank you 🙂 I’m sure the gazebos would appreciate the gesture!
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I’m so glad that gazebos aren’t able to suffer human emotions! The way so many of them are neglected and run down today. we’d all need to rally round and offer our support and kind words of sympathy. And yet, this gazebo has pride, and would probably want to stand on his/her own two feet. Great poem. 🙂
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Yes indeed, gazebos are a vital and overlooked member of our communities!! This particular gazebo will not back down and has made a stand with his/her own two feet (or six or more pillars?) I’m glad you enjoyed my poem!! 😀
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I love gazebos and this one looks particularly happy full of good memories I think. Your poem was fabulous!
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Well, looks can be deceiving…
Thank you, Creatopath! 🙂
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Congratulations! I think you have captured this gazebo perfectly and its public shame. 🙂
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Thanks! I hope you’ve enjoyed my poem 😀
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Yeah so this just happened… Gave you a wee bit of a shout out!
https://authenticitee.wordpress.com/2015/05/31/i-lovehate-your-song/
Do stop by!
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Alright!
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