It was the church that she always dreamed of getting married in.
The girl glided silently down the aisle, her face the portrait of quiescent bliss. She was downed in a white gown complete with a veil and the light rays which shone through the cathedral’s mosaic windows collected around her figure as a shimmering aura.
But the aura made her pulsate with brightness, almost spookily. And when you looked closely, when the aura was its brightest, she seemed almost translucent. And when you look even closer, you could see that her feet never touch the floor. But you could see the trail of water that drops in her wake. Listen to it. It goes drip… drip… drip…
(Jaws theme music) Duh duh duh duh…my heart was all racing and what not!
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Oh dear! I didn’t mean to make it sound that horrific! But it is a good thing after all! Thanks for reading and commenting!! Much appreciated, e 😀
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Lol you’re fine! Riveting shall we say? Yes riveting!!
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Creepy! I wonder how often she plays this scene out? Kinda sad that she (presumably) drowned before getting her dream wedding. Or alternatively she’s some kind of water spirit.
Nice story, got me to thinking!
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Well done Frederick! I wonder if SHE knows she is dripping and not walking …….
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Fred, this is excellent! I like the excitement build-up and then the twist at the end that she is a ghost from a girl that had drowned. I think it is brilliant!
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Very creepy. Love the idea of a haunted church!
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Great ending! And thanks for the new word – quiescent!
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Goosebumps
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