It was intense! The most intense game where the pieces flew off the board mercilessly and unrelentingly as the various champions battled it out. As you watched, you swear it is going in the favor of one, but then you also watched as he was overthrown by a most unexpected assailant. Then as you watched further, that assailant was bested again by yet another assailant.
The audience were kept on the edge of their seats. Even the commentators were confused as they tried to predict the direction of the game, only to be at a loss for words when the tides abruptly turned, or at least, that was how he imagined it to be as he played his game of solitaire.
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Excellent post. The last line is fantastic. I never felt that way playing solitaire.
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Well, you could… ‘With Some Imagination’ 😛
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I was in for the kill, but wait, it’s all in his head. Good one.
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Thanks 🙂
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Interesting style.
The long sentences leave AnElephant breathless!
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Hehe, I do realise I tend to write with very long sentences quite often.
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Loved it Fred! It was face paced and then the great ending! Wonderful!
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Haha ‘face paced’? Anyway, I used to wonder if action movies can be written in text and have the same effect. Perhaps they could! 😀 Thank you PJ!!
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Well done Frederick! I enjoyed your story. Be well… ^..^
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great imagination
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thanks!
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I like it, and so do I.
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Well the two of you has made me very proud
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Sweet story the way it adds action and suspense to solitaire! It gave me a chuckle 🙂 This is so well done!
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Thank you very much! I’m glad this story went the way I had hoped 🙂
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That is why the imagination is a fantastic gift.
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Yep, indeed it is!
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Wonderful imaginative flash fiction, Frederick! The imagination is a beautiful thing 😀
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[…] WITH SOME IMAGINATION — great flash fiction with an unexpected twist at the end! […]
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